scullhaven

Welp, let's just say then for the sake of this story, it's normal lol. anyways it doesn't change anything, plus like you said. it did happen, even if he was albino. :p

both red and purple I read

at least he only went through those strong emotions and got what he wanted, and then put obito through hell as well. at least to my understanding he didn't know

yeah, but to Madara he doesn't know that :p

This chapter will be editted though once again. Thanks again for catching this.

This does now feel kinda confusing, thanks for bringing it up. I was trying to imply that the performance being sold by Pycelle, his acting skills made the Mad King feel like Rhaegar was also Pycelles son because he acted more sad than the Mad King did as his true father. I hope that made sense...

oh thanks 🙏. I will fix that in future chapters

no, he got it from frustration at being weak from being inside a 4 year old body and getting hit was a wake up call which in shame and anger was enough emotions to awaken his sharingan. anyways it make sense, but it doesnt make this predictable at all, and that he will constantly lose like a random self insert protag and then win. no he will just win He won't be abused anymore after this, if you can even call this an abuse. he simply lost because of his untrained body as a literal 4 year old couldn't keep up with his actions. the world works differently, it's real life, compare to Madara anime world. but I do try keeping madara anime combat style as it's interested and makes him unique. like the stone throwing, realistically that's impossible. Finally I am not making this a silly protagonist comb out of the womb and opening a harem to every girl he can find. especially since awakens his single sharingan tomoe, it's gonna be almost impossible to even touch him now...

He doesn't even know whats in this world, it's totally foreign to him... what if he has to face those overpowered cultivation chinese fanfic protagonists. He is only saying that even if he can't be the strongest he can protect them.

To be honest this is a fair review... and it also made me laugh. Yeah, It's my first time writing man, the beginning is mainly meant as an introduction as well as setting a tone, I understood from reviews that it may have not been needed, but the sacking, was new to me personally, like I said I only followed the shows and I wrote with that in mind. Slowly I have been learning lore from wikis to try to cater to more of the audience. I felt it was also necessary for those who don't know much about it as well, plus it's from my own different pov perspective that may differ from other fics. Now we should be seeing almost all of Madara, I just needed a beginning. I hope you still keep reading personally, but I can understand as well as it feels a bit slow. But this is also why I'm updating a chapter daily. What can I say except its a slow burner, but now its cookin