Sakuma_Vano

I read this FF in the hope that they would finally have se×, have children, get married and live happily, but what I saw at the end was just a kiss and Caera's Dreamy dreams. The author abandoned this project at the most interesting moment and, to put it mildly, I am very disappointed

THAT, JUST, PERFECT!

so cringeeeeeeeeeeee

Bro, fan fiction has good potential, but I've read 24 chapters and haven't seen much of yours. I am one of those who have read the novel not only by manhwa, and I seem to be rereading it again, but with the participation of Meliodas and Elizabeth, I understand that the author is a beginner and, to be honest, to invent his own and write, roughly speaking, "laziness", but a little of his own stories and at least some influence on the plot it doesn't hurt from Meliodas, as I said, it's like I'm rereading a novel and thanks to this I know everything in advance, it's predictable, and I'm not talking about mistakes in writing yet, no offense to the author, but he better know what's wrong with fan fiction so that in the future It was easier and better for him to write. Bye bye