Mr_Visionlesstime

it's a well written story and one of my new personal favourites. Hope to see more

they so cute 🤍

honestly, the chapters felt too short that I didn't feel glue to it. The system aspects is okay because it kinda follows most system stories formula but I'm guessing the author is going to make it different from the others in the later stage. that is my only complaint, everything else is okay honestly. so I'm willing to continue reading and see how it progresses.

man can just look where your weak points are and then it's gg

The story is very well written and with both its characters and their interactions. I will say that I not a fan overly described stories, but wasn't too bad in my opinion. The plot is quite intriguing, which actually got me going and Alex being my favourite character in my opinion. Overly, keep updating and walking hard because this is amazing.

A very intriguing story that I highly recommend everyone to read.

Ngl I would have kick him out immediately if he tried overstaying his welcome

Amazing chapters so far and I'm really looking for more chapters

DRAKE

i love this and can't wait for more. please keep it up