Lazypen1

he's disgusting Eww

you can say that. He's sixteen, alright. he's a kid... yeah but he's smaller than a normal sixteen years old boy

Hes's gonna get strong, and his body will undergo a transformation

Also, good work author. Don't stop, okay

I don't know why this book has low likes and Colls because .... It's amazing, too good. I've only read up to five chapters but I can not explain how interesting the book is. Luci is exactly the characteristics of how a demon is supposed to. Strong despite having his demonic powers sealed, mindlessly killing his enemies without thinking twice... I can not get enough of him. I just hope he makes some friends though so that his journey won't be a boring one.

It's an interesting read as far as I am concerned... This is your first time, right? it's no problem, keep writing and soon, you will perfect your skills

You shouldn't change the fonts or what's, okay?

"Okay," she replied.

You could put their replies in quotation marks. like this ... "Within five minutes," he replied.

thank you for the review