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Nah. It would change like 5 to 6 chaps of the story and I've already changed it. As for the future chapters and the readers who had already read the old version, I would add warnings.
I changed the plot. You can backread it, but now, he never killed the children.
Bruh, why are you so fast to judge things??? Do you even know what he meant when he said that? Alex isn't the type to let anyone walk over him, so there's n way he would appear weak. He just doesn't want to appear as strong as he is. He wants people to think that he's just strong and not a monster. As for your review, man read the next chapters, you will see the mention of moles and all. I've never just said that in the comment. There was always a mention of them in the later chapters.
He just never thought about it. In his past life, Alex was always just protecting his loved ones since they only had him. Here, in this world, he realized that the ones he cares for, may have others they care for and by mistake, he had harmed one such person. He had just never been in a situation like that, and he did what he did. There won't be a next time like he said.
I would suggest you read the other comment which have similar criticism about this scene. I have justified enough and in one comment I even presented the scenarios that could've happened. Please go through them to understand why he did what he did.
Does Alex look like the person who would ride the boat of his Mother's fame? His goal is to bcs the strongest by himself after all.
No. He is the second prince bcs his uncle, who's the emperor, has a son older than Alex.
Alex wouldn't even have thought of having a harem if Sophie didn't want him to.
First of all, thank you for the review. Now in my defence, you did exagerate the review a bit, especially about Sophie. Yeah, I get that it's not very realistic to have that type of girl, but it's not impossible. Just bcs you haven't seen one doesn't mean there isn't one (no offence). As for MC being bland, well... The whole book is about the MC yet you are judging him based on the first 20 chaps... As for your point about redundancy. Honestly, I won't get anything by filling the word count of the free chapters. All I wanted was to go deeper into the character or description for me to write like that. Though, I would accept it as my fault there since I've improved that issue later on. Now onto your second point. All I would say is that the instance like the gacha wheel are very rare, or maybe that's the only one. As you've said at the end of the review, you must have patience if you want to like the book. This is not me saying but the thoughts of the readers who have stayed with me until now. Story is all about character development, so judging character based on what you see in the early chapter is not the best thing one could do. Now, that was all I had to say, and again, thank you for the review as it had been a while since I got a good and helpful review. I can't change what I've written but for the next book, I'll try not to make the same mistake.
You are supposed to be confused. That confusion would only be cleared in the next chapter.