Musouka

Don't forget that the protagonist was reincarnated with knowledge of the state of the story's world. He despises how they [the Celestial Dragons] sit around waiting for their downfall and amuse themselves with trivial matters. Will the World Government really protect them until the end? As for his situation with the pirates, he hasn't interacted with them in the story yet So why do you say that the chapter in which there was talk about pirates was when some Celestial Dragons spread rumors about his dealings with pirates? Naturally, he shows the opposite of that, as the Celestial Dragons despise them And no, he is not gay we are building a story and events here. If you want to see +18 chapters to suggest otherwise, then say so. He also does not despise his social class; he has remained cautious until now due to the mysterious circumstances of his parents' death and his ambiguous situation, which will be revealed later on.

I will reduce their influence in the story.

I understand what you're saying, and I completely agree with you. But in your opinion, has enough focus been placed on the Celestial Dragons in the story? When we think of a Celestial Dragon, what often comes to mind is that they're extravagant fools who only know how to play. I don’t see much reason for their fearsome reputation other than that. However, I wanted to focus a bit on how their system works within Mariejois, even among the higher-ups, where there are interests and power plays. I also wanted to show that there are intelligent individuals and schemes among them. If you notice, no one has killed another within their ranks so far. In my story, the main character is a Celestial Dragon, and I wanted to build a foundation around his environment before launching into the world and balancing it with the events we know from the original story. If we only focus on the pirate world, I don't see much room for creativity beyond changing some events. In the end, thank you for your observations. I stopped releasing chapters due to changing my job, but I will continue the story soon, and I hope to see your feedback when that happens

Of course, this is what I’m working on currently. It’s just that I needed to set the time period for the story for now and increase its pace

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I may have exaggerated a little, but if we follow this line of thinking, we'll end up with an all-powerful protagonist where everything goes his way and everyone else is just foolish except for him. We're in a world where I want to highlight the cunning of some Celestial Dragons and give value to certain characters who were barely touched upon in the story. Of course thanks for the reminder, and I’ve tried to fix this in the upcoming chapters.

I will review the dialogue in the future and format it properly The exciting events will start soon