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In five or ten chapters, I don't remember which, he will not be as passive as he used to be.

Just a question: what AI tool do you use for the lemon? ChatGPT doesn't allow writing anything erotic.

I don't know if this guy is a bot or real but he gives only one star to everything.

His past life isn't necessary; what matters is his interactions with the other characters, which should make him feel more human. He should undergo character development after each arc, evolving into a more interesting individual with clear goals, rather than just being a fan of the One Piece world.

It's much improved compared to before, but the pace is too fast. We don’t know much about the main character; we only know that he is a fan. Beyond that, we lack information about his abilities, and it feels like he doesn’t undergo much character development. To enhance the story, make the main character more human than robotic and give him a clear goal.

You can remove this section as it is unnecessary.

I'm completely certain that this was written by an AI. I recommend deleting the last two paragraphs, as they don't fit naturally with the story. ChatGPT isn't the most advanced AI yet; you can encourage it to make character interactions feel more realistic with the original character.

The thing is that this fanfiction is very old, and the author gave her the devil fruit before it was revealed that Marco had the fruit.

Let say there are two fruit

This fanfiction is old and was released before Marco's Devil Fruit was revealed.