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FallenMoon3

FallenMoon3

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2024-08-07 UnidoGlobal
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  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon37 days ago
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    Famous Review from the Author Anyway, this is a cultivation adventure with action and some mysteries. Many people have enjoyed it, so maybe you will too. The story focuses on the protagonist's evolution in power and as a person, as he travels to many places and faces numerous challenges. There are various countries in the protagonist's world inspired by different societies and cultures from our world and several other fantasy worlds. This universe also includes multiple dimensions with distinct races (Elves, beasts, demons, dragons, deities...), and, of course, the MC will have to face them all in his journey to achieve his goals. Style: Strongly inspired by European medieval fantasy and Xianxia stories.

  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon34 months ago
    Respondeu a darcymcgrath

    Of course, feedback, criticism, all of this helps me to improve, if there is something you didn't like, you can let me know.

  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon35 months ago
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    It was good, you write well and managed to correctly emphasize the characters' feelings and emotions. I think you have potential.

  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon35 months ago
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    Good writing, has potential. OP protagonist is not my style but there may be exceptions

  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon35 months ago
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    Good start, it looks promising, you can see that the author already has a lot of things planned

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  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon35 months ago
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    It's not really my style, but I found it interesting, it looks promising. Good Luck

  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon35 months ago
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    Interesting and has potential. I'm looking forward to seeing how the protagonist will progress in this world.

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  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon35 months ago
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    Hey brother writer! I'm a beginner writer, but after reading a few chapters, I decided to give you a tip. Some paragraphs were a little too long, which can be a bit annoying, so trying to keep the paragraph lengths similar might be a good idea. As for the rest, I found the story promising and interesting. And if you like cultivation and fantasy, check out my novel. Good luck

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  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon35 months ago
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    The structure of the writing is well developed, the characters act naturally, and the story's proposal is peculiar and innovative. And from what was presented of the world we can see that there is still a lot to come.

  • FallenMoon3
    FallenMoon35 months ago
    Comentou

    I think your writing is really good. If you have good world-building and power development planned, you'll probably go far. The "genius" tag usually concerns me; are you planning to make an OP MC? Oh, and if you could review my book, I would appreciate it. I'm just starting out.