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A good start to the story, I hope you will finish it without giving up on this fanfic. Yes, the story has shortcomings, mistakes, it is not perfect, as is everything in this world. Keep up the good work, I wish you inspiration and good health

Amazing. Even though I not like some decisions he made, but it was logical decisions. Make more

I love this story, it's been great so far. You just need to correct the mistakes. Otherwise, this is a great read. Great fanfic. There are more chapters on Patreon