Johan_13

Not a great story, plot simple and normal but there are much room for story development so i will say it can be a great story as the story is developing. there are lacking in depth dialogue and depth writing and overall ok. i will love reading it

...__________________________________________ Nothing to say about this, i've read the dropped god version so ovl 7/10. However i can see lot of changes

Ammm...i dont know what to say, chapter 4 made it wired and dark too. Chapter 5 was not much dark but chapter 4 is like holy cow, i loved it

Its my second time reading it bcs i came from wattpad however now i can see some changes in chapter's its a huge change specially 1&2 changed a lot. Maybe you've improved it.