Alright, I'll give my 100% honest review. First, I must admit that the way the background/setting was done, I could vividly visualized the surroundings as if I was with the characters. The description was precise and spot on. Second, the characters. The way the author introduced them in the piloting chapters were remarkable. I think, opposite attraction, would be the right word to describe their future romance. Lastly, the plot. It was catching and interesting. How the author wove the plot was beyond words. Definitely a hooking story. But, I would like to conclude this review with a constructive criticism, knowing that it would make the story more piquing for readers. Honestly, the author should consider putting some cliffhangers at those starting chapters. They lack it. Although the story was good, having cliffhanger scenes at the end part would even elevate this story to greater heights. Something that would make readers put them at the edge of their seats and eager to read the next chapter. Cliffhanger is an essential ingredient to a great story. Without it, even though the plot, setting and characters were built immaculately, the story would just be plain and simple. I hope my review helped in some ways. Goodluck, dear author.

Well, what can I say, the reviews were true enough. This story has it. It has the wow factor that could make a reader turn a page. The plot, together with the characters, were captivating and intriguing. Great start, dear author! Kudos to you!

After reading the piloting chapters, I would say that the story was light and easy to comprehend. The construction of both setting and plot were satisfactory. If there just one thing I could comment about, with the way the writing was done, there's no quotation marks during the dialogues. It was a bit hard to analyze whether the lines were narrations or part of a conversation. It would be much better if you put quotation marks every time characters are talking, dear author. I believe that's SOP to writers. But aside from that, the story is nice.

This is a very interesting story. The way the background was set, how the characters were precisely described, one can fully visualize the story as it goes. The plot was also smooth and on point. This story could go a long mile with stable and adequate updates. Good start!

Oh, I loved the suspense this story is giving me. The character of Dan was somewhat rebellious yet smart-willed. I loved the way the plot moves from the description of the setting, to the thrill it was heading. A great start for me after reading the piloting chapters. Good job, Sir.

Oh, I loved the suspense so much and also the cliffhangers. This story is something a reader will not stop reading. If there's a few moee chapters, I might read it until the last part. Great start!

Second paragraph: Honestly the first chapter was compelling......

I don't know know why the other reviews were like that, but this is how I write a review. An honest and constructive review. Honestly the first story was compelling and intriguing as well. The background/setting was precisely describe. I could envisioned the exact place as if I was there with Megami. There are some parts that bothers me though by just reading the piloting chapter/s. First: the proper use of quotation, which I commented at the chapter already. And next was during a dialogue, which I also left a comment there at the chapter. A little polish will definitely give this book an edge since the story was catching.

Better seperate the lines, since it was a conversation. Put them in seperate paragraphs

This should be in single quotation ('), since the character was talking to himself or thinking in his mind.

My honest to goodness review: I hate to stop reading upto chapter 2, although I find the story interesting and the plot was piquing, but the lack of proper quotations and the space in between words were giving me a hard time to read thoroughly. Polishing needs to be done, dear author. I like the setting though, of course, it's the Philippines. My country.

I think it's best if: Albert, Maria's husband, went... & also, a.m. is morning. So either, remove the a.m. & just say 4 in the morning.