i love villain MC i hate romance i like harem but not when the MC cares and sacrifice i love selfish MC
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Continue but stay away from romance and don't let him care about his women too much (women are just tools) and also increase the degree of his evil actions. (Honestly, one of the things I didn't like the most in the novel is that he had a daughter. How can he, at this age and with this strength, still give birth to a girl with this ease?) Other than that, his wife benefits more than he does, and no villain would accept to let someone benefit from him except for a price, and most likely this price is that after the benefit ends, he kills him. **Have you heard of Fang Yuan before?**
I hope this book doesn't have romance, no harem, and the hero isn't kind.
First of all, it's a great story, my friend. Second, we want to see Kyle kill everyone, even Kim and his entire family, so that his power reaches the top of this world and he emerges from the trial with the highest degree, because I believe that chaos means causing destruction wherever he goes. ..... Third, I believe that the second trial should be the void, because the void means that he will eliminate all creatures in this world. As for nothingness, it means that he will destroy the world to the point that there is nothing left.
If you ask me about my opinion as a reader, of course I will tell you that I want the pace to pick up. I want to see the hero’s development. I want to see his first kill. I want to see how he controls those around him, how he will hide his power, how he will eliminate his family when they oppose him and will not feel any remorse. He will even watch them and laugh. How a female character will find herself arrogant towards him and will treat him arrogantly, so he will swallow her and her family to the ground. How he will torture her and watch her being tortured and smile. I want to see the second Fang Yuan, but without setbacks, without the sky controlling him from behind the scenes.
As a start, we cannot say that it is slow, and if the upcoming events are strong, you must say that you are making the story on a low heat (this is my opinion as a writer).
Good start.. but how can a villain love... and how can a villain feel feelings to protect his family... the real villain, if he felt feelings towards someone, would kill them immediately to remove their weaknesses. Also, if we remove the #villain tag from the novel, how can he blame his mother after what her father did to them, to get pregnant with another child from him and accept this for herself... Also, the formation of the system is very bad, I have never seen an evil system this bad before... The novel started well, but the writer did not know how to complete it... I thank the writer for understanding his mistake and overlooking the completion of the novel... and I regret to myself that I wasted my time reading garbage
There is a question why the villain wants to strengthen his relationship with Jack.
What is this? She also loves someone else and why is he treating her so well?
and the marriage !!! What I see happening now is that he is turning into a good person, which is the complete opposite of what I started reading for. Also, his marriage to the princess, what is that and how did it happen? She also tells me that the princess wants to test him and that he will submit to a king... Where is the majesty of the wicked? Where is their power and where is their love of controlling those around them... In my humble opinion, I think that he should kill the princess after enjoying her because she is also vulnerable to revealing his secret.
great job 👏 👍