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Sycore_w

Sycore_w

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Writer of novels. My contact email is - sycore.w@gmail.com

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  • Sycore_w
    Sycore_w4h
    Respondeu a Professor_Light

    Well, he might have, but he would be cured soon enough, for better or worse...

    For Yuta all the people at the orphanage are just an annoyance that he must endure and there is no other way around that. Well, truth is that Yuta doesn't remember their names and doesn't know them even at this point despite them being the only 3 of the children that enrolled at the academy with him this year from his orphanage. Yuta couldn't care any less about those 3. 
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    Respondeu a Wotoadv

    Sorry but it seems that you misunderstood something, the nine-tails incident happened the night before our MC reincarnated.

    There will be Kumo's delegation for signing peace, and delegation's head will try to kidnap Hinata, the Hyuga's princess, but his true goal will be to die by the hands of Hiashi and his delegation will make a scene demanding the body of Hiashi as compensation, and Hizashi will sacrifice himself instead. The peace between Kumo and Konoha will be signed after that.' Yuta thought while making his way to the participant's balcony.
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    Respondeu a Professor_Light

    A little clarification here - the soul energy would take 30 days to refill every time he time travels, I don't remember if it already explained at this point or not, so... sorry for a possibly a spoiler here

    'Third goal will be immortality of course! There are definitely ways to do that. Like who wouldn't want to become immortal and live as long as they want without having to worry about time and age? I will able to achieve some kind of immortality with traveling back in time, but that is not enough.' 
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    Respondeu a Crabble

    Yea I know, sorry for that, early chapters are something that I'm not proud of, it's my first writing work and there is also a language barrier so early chapters are not that great, but it's getting better in later chapters, that is for sure.

    'The feeling of emptiness that has resulted from depleting soul energy decreased very little, with that speed it will take around 2-3 weeks to fully regenerate it I suppose. I tried to use my time travel recently to do another test and it didn't work, it feels like I need my soul energy fully restored to do any time travel at all, no matter the distance of that I wish to travel.' 
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    Respondeu a J3M_FF

    The idea was that those stuff was just a great boosts but not picking it will not limit our MC. For example, any shinobi can master any of the five basic elements regardless of their affinity, it's just would take a lot of time and efforts.

    'I still hope to be able to master Hiraishin (Flying Thunder God) technique without selecting Space-Time affinity and Sage mode without nature energy affinity. After all, with Time control ability I should have all the time in the world I need for that.' 
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    Respondeu a J3M_FF

    Nope, I don't think there would be anything shinobi related for unauthorized civilians at all, at least not in my story. You see, I make it somewhat hardcore. In many fanfics there is a jutsus in the academy library for free, but in my story there isn't any, and jutsu are heavily guarded and stuff like that.

    'Now that I can feel and control my chakra it's time for me to try the leaf concentration exercise. According to it I need to stick the leaf to my forehead and concentrate my chakra on it in a way that it will not fall. But I probably have to do that without anyone's noticing me. Civilian orphans shouldn't know about this exercise after all.' 
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    Respondeu a J3M_FF

    Well, the idea was that the difference between the normal people chakra amount and the academy student that worked on it for a year, would be very big. In numbers it will be: normal human - 5 chakra, second year student - 30, Genin - 100. The crazy growth come from that, but in the bigger picture perspective it's not that significant, like growing chakra from 5 to 20, like it's four times bigger, but it's still just 20. I hope that makes sense.

    [AN: I read some other fanfics of Naruto, and there authors often use the term of 'unlocking chakra', and this is strange to me. In my understanding there is nothing to 'unlock' about chakra, the problem is to sense and control it. Then when you start controlling it and spend it, your body starts to regenerate it and the whole thing is like muscles, the more you use it – the more it grows.
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    Respondeu a Ezzy_E

    Just for some stuff for the future, there is a reason

    [AN: I added a new original thing here – Soul energy, so the whole Time control ability will depend on it and not on chakra, as I wanted it to be something special and not from the world of Naruto itself. And spiritual energy that limits Time control capabilities is also kind of related to the same thing - soul. 
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  • Sycore_w
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    Comentou

    Mieko being mentioned more and more recently. Maybe, just maybe, there some sort of her revival is coming? How about to force Nagato with spirit transformation jutsu to revive her instead of Konoha cannon fodder after Nagato came to Konoha to die? Why let Nagato to waste himself on reviving Konoha fodder and Kakashi when he can revive Mieko instead, right?

    In the tower, Hoka asked, "By the way, what was that Fire Dragon jutsu you used? It didn't feel like normal Fire jutsus. The heat it radiated was far more intense. It almost reminded me of your and Mieko's combination jutsu, but this one seemed a lot more intense."
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    Sycore_w23h
    Respondeu a Kamikaze_Eagle

    That is an interesting take on the matter, I like it. The problem is that Danzo is a member of the council, that means that he can't be easily dealt with, and root is the subdivision of ANBU, that is much higher in the power hierarchy than the police force.

    But I only have five years to resolve the crisis with the Uchiha clan. The easiest way would probably be to convince Shisui to make a move on Danzo, and then somehow calm down the Uchiha coup supporters in the clan, and the sooner it's done the easier it will be to calm down Uchihas. Soon Itachi should become a close friend with Shisui, I will wait a little more before making my move.'
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    Respondeu a _Khaled_

    That is obvious of course, but the problem is deeper, as they was preparing coup not without a reason, even without a coup they will be eliminated soon enough by one of the Danzo's schemes, at least in my understanding of the plot there.

    'And if that coup will happen, even more people might die, and another shinobi war can also start because of that. So currently even if I want to intervene in this event, it's not like I have any good solution to that.'
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    Respondeu a Neo_Night

    Well, they definitely met, but are they friends already? There is a filler episode of shippuden where Itachi and Shisui were spend time together in the woods and fight a few root shinobi, Itachi was already using sharingan at that point and they become friends during that event, and considering that Itachi awoken his sharingan only a year after graduation during his teammate's death, I don't consider them friends yet. I hope that make sense

    But I only have five years to resolve the crisis with the Uchiha clan. The easiest way would probably be to convince Shisui to make a move on Danzo, and then somehow calm down the Uchiha coup supporters in the clan, and the sooner it's done the easier it will be to calm down Uchihas. Soon Itachi should become a close friend with Shisui, I will wait a little more before making my move.'
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    Respondeu a Hasan_Shopnil

    To answer the question of how MC's chakra grown so much with his spiritual energy alone - I'm going with the theory that chakra is the mix of physical and spiritual energies, but it's not 50/50 mix, it's whatever is there-mix, and until the disbalance not become too ridiculous, like 1to99 of value, there will be no other problems except the sage mode training problem, as it requires achieving the balance between 3 energies, physical energy included. And to address the Otsutsuki power - it's ridiculously strong and there is no point to consider it right now, as Elite Jonins are canon fodder for them and Kage level shinobi is just weaklings to them, so up to at least Kage level MC shouldn't even think about how to countering Otsutsuki. I hope that make sense. Also I'm glad that you notice MC's changing mentality, it's something that I planned a long time ago.

    Ch 51 Yuta’s Second Fight with Tatsuko
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  • Sycore_w
    Sycore_w1d
    Respondeu a Z1op

    That might be true, but the idea behind that back then was that 1k points is the base, and abilities costs is based on the idea to limit what the MC can get in total, the abilities costs was not based on their actual value, I hope that makes sense

    I also might've skipped the whole process of choosing ability and just gave MC the Time control, but I wanted to make it more entertaining. Well, what would you choose in that situation? Please let me know in the comments. 
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    Respondeu a Z1op

    Sorry to hear that, I'm not read any story like that before but here MC has consequences and it's not entirely 'Save-Load'. He travels it time with his soul, so any damage to soul will be permanent. Later on he will probably travel in time with his whole body, so the same rules will be applied there as well.

    Ch 2 Time travel ability?
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    Respondeu a Mystero

    In my understanding it's Might Guy is who has 0 talent in everything but taijutsu, for comparison. Yuta has decent talent, not very good but not bad either, to grow his chakra level to Jonin level in just 20 years in time-loops with his spiritual energy alone its something admirable, as most shinobi in the world are not able to get to the Jonin level in their whole life...

    Ch 50 The End of Time-Loop Training, Huge Power-Up
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    Sycore_w2d
    Respondeu a Reizel_Chen

    Yea, that's right, the arm will be back after traveling in time past the point in time when he lost it.

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    Sycore_w2d
    Respondeu a OLB

    Yea, sorry about that, the early chapters are bad as it's my first work and English is my second language, but I'm trying to improve my writing in the process.

    Ch 8 First day at the academy
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    Sycore_w2d
    Respondeu a Sycore_w

    Time travel can be very confusing

    At this point, having only one arm Yuta was already forced to perform chakra molding needed for his jutsus manually for half of it, so getting rid of the hand seals at all is the logical next step for him.
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  • Sycore_w
    Sycore_w2d
    Respondeu a Kamish12

    Yes, he would have his arm back after he would travel back in time past the point he lost it, which he didn't done yet.

    At this point, having only one arm Yuta was already forced to perform chakra molding needed for his jutsus manually for half of it, so getting rid of the hand seals at all is the logical next step for him.
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