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thanks, I have corrected it
there is a reason, a pretty big one!
it's completely fine. criticism is like medicine if you take it with the intention of improving. comment if you find faults I will try my best to fix them.
the information he holds is too insignificant for her. read more you will understand.
"he saw her pick up the sword".....that's all he saw, she could have used it to kill him while he was unconscious. by the way, he was confirming the fact that she died with himself, it's like how some people talk to themself
Oh, when she came here she wasn't in the right state of mind, remember I wrote a line "with some fresh small cut all over her body" it meant that she just came out of a fight, and as for why she would choose the letter opinion is because — imagine you were betrayed by the people you trusted all your life, and the child is proof of one of those betrayal. how and what would you choose?