Logic_Trait

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bruh

what if ren fell in love with someone else other than Lily (definitely ruby) masking any lingering regrets the previous ren had

somehow I feel something similar to that may happen

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I think Noah has done something wrong he has not only fastened one of the main characters' corruption, but he made himself an enemy not only the school but the main characters. He may convince the school that he was controlled or he may convince them that it was an accident as he didn't kill Rylan and that he saved the girl .Or Rylan will convince himself that it is some sort of dream or something. Well with how it is going I can guess he will turn himself into an unknown villain making the main characters have a similar goal of killing the villain and slowly carving them to be real heroes while also not giving them a chance to turn into villains so if they stop saving people or many innocents will face consequences (without a doubt he will still be in the school).Or maybe just kill them. In the current fight he had the chance to convince rylan that it was an accident or at the end of the fight while rylan was questioning his life choice he may cut in telling that he is not wrong (maybe act emotional that he saw a future where they turned evil) and in that sense not only will he get an ally but will stop him from turning evil as he is currently too innocent (while convincing rylan he will say that he went on the circle by accident and that he had to stop him from misunderstanding. I am sorry from giving you a seizure from this big reply.I AM NOT criticising your work I am just analysing and saying my opinion in some things.You have actually done an amazing job getting me this invested in your novel also pls don't let this reply limit your thoughts in the plot as I am sure you have better thoughts.I truly love the story and the plot and I wish you can keep going. I definitely have more to say, but I will leave it at that.Also, please don't criticise my english.

thank you for the two chapters they were a banger .Keep up the good work.

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