Abhay_Adhikari_6709

I am disappointed with this novel, it feels like I am reading a story written by Chat GPT. The story and plot could have been nice if it was written well. There is so little character development, it feels like I am reading about the same Harry from chapter 1. Where is the growth? It just a bad novel overall, it gives HP fanfictions a bad rep, and the only reason it's a little popular is because of quick updates.

Seems like a fanfic written by Chat GPT. I have read alot of fanfics written in this style, where there is very little dailougue, and they just describe everything instead. Overall, not impressed![img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

this is going nicely! thank you for your hard work!

You are doing so great! thank you for your hard work!

I really enjoyed reading your work, this is coming along great and I'm looking forward to more. Thank you for your hard work author!

lol you got my vote.... keep up the great chapters, and thank you for your hard work!