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It seems that good taste begets good writing. Your style is very clean, and easy to understand and visualize. I love a good eastern villain. The critique I have is it feels like there should have been a chapter or two prior to explain the character and the world through a possible action scene, reincarnation, or tragedy plot. The world/magic is only as interesting as the character using it. Wonderfully good writing, it just needs your special twist on the genre/magic system and a little more understanding of the character’s motives.

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Hey… that’s my name!!! 👀

Reverend Insanity and Sword God in a World of Magic are my favorite non-romance/harem villain stories. Both stories have the true entire world against only yourself vibe.

Love me a good eastern novel. I like where the book is headed, it’s obvious you have a good idea about the future of your story. Nice writing too, good descriptions and dialogue. My only critique is that it’s very slow in the beginning, I wish you had begun with the pagoda opening instead of the awkward two year training/breakfast montage.

No romance or harem at all for the MC.

Hahahah yes. All will be revealed soon.

Trying to do at least a chapter a day. P.S. Anya the bird will be back!

I really do like your writing, it’s good work. Well above the standard on this site. Wish you the best on your future works.

Sure. I felt like there wasn’t a good sense of who the main character was. Obviously it’s the number, but the voice of whoever it is seemed out of place, or even just off.