Goduran

I dropped it at chapter 3 because the author went overboard with the abilities, when the 10 Shadows Technique is already more than enough

This chapter felt way too forced. There’s no reason for the protagonist to deny his power; he should literally be happy or euphoric about having a quirk. It’s the first piece of good news he's gotten in the entire shitty day he just had

Congratulations on witnessing a person in panic for the first time

The protagonist's endurance and durability are pretty exaggerated in this chapter, but I guess he was slowly recovering while eating Bram

It's not bad, and here is what was missing from the first chapter

A pretty short chapter that tells me nothing literally nothing. It doesn't seem to have a hidden meaning or any reflection either it’s just a short chapter

Bram:

Damn... What a great second episode, it's so good.

I'm going to use the grand tactic of skipping the whole chapter full of an absurdly giant and unnecessary explanation to start the real story

A pretty rushed first chapter with a robot protagonist, and don't even get me started on the falna. Just the fact that he was given 2 extra abilities on top of the 10 Shadows kind of ruined my desire to read the fanfic, but I'll have faith and read a few more chapters