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yh I dropped the second he started with snow

after a while this isn't even a fanfic anymore , just a slightly better version of what happened in rl . Sure the mc contributes more to the games but the end result remains the same as in the real world where the mc loses the game and that's just not enjoyable, what's the point of even writing the fan fic then ? Tristan should've been the anomaly which makes the big difference , and he was doing that in the beginning of the story but it seems the author forgot that at some point and decided to nerf him. it's just not enjoyable anymore . you already know which games he's going to win and which games he's going to lose . the only difference the author might make is in his second game against Manchester , turning the previous loss into a win or a draw and even then I'm still not hopeful of the author even changing the final score at all from the way they are developing this story

you sound like the type who thinks killing off characters and traumatizing the mc gives them "depth" and character development lol , go argue with someone else

yh I dropped it a little while after this comment , it became ridiculous

can't remember I think it's called suicide drones or murder drones

nope I got tired of it

I'm ngl , after all those 5 star reviews I expected more , so far the writing is pretty mediocre and I can barely immerse myself in it because of how 'forced' or rushed the plot is

ok so I went back and read it after you said this and yeah the reason changes absolutely nothing , whether it's kael or Noel the fact still remains that you turned your mc into a pathetic sociopath out of the blue who thinks killing a few male lion CUBS is a way to show dominance and lacks zero compassion/loyalty to his own pride , treating them as a means to an end . and this is coming from someone who genuinely loves the idea of tyrants . You just made a weakminded sociopath that is unlikeable. and you really should add the villain tag.