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yeah I will also drop this one, that girl is a bitch that betray mc for satisfying her family, now she doesn't deserve him

please don't make this happen

please don't make her the waifu, she was cheating on mc with the excuse of her family, she doesn't deserve

It's good, sometimes author misplaced details and in first chapter everything was compiled into a paragraph, but later on it was easy to read with good spacing although story was good from the start, but author should slow his growth as at 15 years he's called best player of valencia, which seems bit too much unrealistic. but i like the story, hope author continues it 300+ chapters

just make it ivan, sounds cool

no

System being honest

It's so good, I didn't expect at start to be this good. btw author, is mc having a system in future