BonVoyage
Persona is good game. So now I am writing about it.
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BonVoyage7minRespondeu a ItzVatsal12[Notice. Calling a Harpy a pigeon is likely to start a fight.]- BonVoyage8minRespondeu a ItzVatsal12
Thankfully, Frey is smart lol, though she isn't above trying to pull small tricks
"Put him to the test, my queen. If he truly is the Child of the Storm, then he must be able to prove his worth." Naya advised. - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Romance_guy
Right now, I have around 10 total planned. Though it might change as the story goes. I do have plans to make the people in it actually relevant and not just be added and then forgotten. You can kind of see what it is with how I'm implementing Shuna. If you read the original, a couple members got purged(like Lina and Trya). So I am changing things up for this one.
- BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Sin_of_sloth
Shoutout to the prettiest of them all, Futaba's mask.
The Teacher and The Student. - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a WONDAWAE
Yaldabaoth's Nahobino, the Nahobino of Control
"Exactly. I understand what is happening now more than ever. Now that I have laid my eyes on you, Fool, I can see that you are exactly the one I have been looking for. I want you to become strong enough to rival a god, so I will teach you personally." - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a LucikielCh 105 The Feedback / Upload Update.
- BonVoyage14hRespondeu a JonRedSea
Don't really have any plans for them rn.
And lastly, if there are any non-spoiler questions feel free to drop them down. - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Just_Some_Random69
I'm willing to try it out, I might give it a chance here in the next couple of chaps that come up
3.) Any other feedback or things in your mind? - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a JonRedSea
Good suggestion!
Honestly, I'm happy with this one, too, There are a bit too many Metaverse chaps lately, but since I spiced it up, I don't think it was too much. - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a JonRedSea2.) How's the Balance between the major pillars of Persona? (Social, Metaverse, Romance, Mystery.)
- BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Sunnnny
Lol, that's dedication, even on the announcement chaps
--- --- --- - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a GemaxterI'm still adapting to the new upload schedule and managing two stories, but I am having more fun than ever.
- BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Gemaxter
POV me lol:
Hey there, ya'll. This is just a quick apology for not being as consistent as I had hoped. I was originally planning on doing it every other day, but yeah, lol. - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Sir_LeirkazzCh 9 The Conqueror of Flames
- BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Cigarrillo_Andante
Great Sage: [Notice. Child content lock has been enabled. Inappropriate memories have been locked away.]
"Huh. why? It was just about to get interesting! I have never heard of a slime having sex before." Veldora said before stopping. - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Freaxx101
Yup! I'm planning on it, rn I am trying to improve on how I deliver it so it doesn't feel as info dumpy
(For those interested in the kingdom-building aspect, I hope you enjoy it, and for those who aren't, feel free to skip until the next part after the — — — It wasn't something I explored too much originally, but I really enjoyed writing this chapter so there probably will be more like it here and there. Let me know what you think. - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a rak_iwal
Eh, they're married, she get's a pass lol.
Shuna stepped forward, her eyes filled with determination. - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Azaroth_3927"Thank you, Rimuru," she whispered, her voice trembling with gratitude. "Thank you for giving me a new life."
- BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Sir_Leirkazz
Nope, plus the demon lord awakening process is going to be different
"Hello, Ellen here. Um, these two are Kaval and Gido. Thanks for saving us." she managed, her gaze darting between Rimuru and the gigantic wolf, Ranga. After a brief pause, she added. "Oh, yeah, and this is Shizu." - BonVoyage14hRespondeu a Sir_Leirkazz
Yeah, he's gonna end up being replaced by a bunch of different monster scientists lol
[This is all according to calculations. The former commander of engineering should have lost his smith's license and is without purpose at the moment. He will follow if you can convince his companions. Offer to heal them, and their loyalty will be ensured long enough to integrate them into your village.]