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Captain_doubloon

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hi! i am an writer, who is trying to create his fiction to make his own anime series

2024-01-17 UnidoIndia
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon3mth
    Comentou

    the start is good, let's see how you're going to cook further

    Ch 1 Wilhelm Peerer
    Journeys with Anti-Space: Wilhelm Peerer
    Fantasia · Ryomen67
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon3mth
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    here are my thoughts after reviewing about 4 to 5 books which were female oriented these sure is catchy, addictive and a story where i guess female readers may read more and writing style is amazing, pace of the story is good too moreover i can definitely recommend this for female readers! keep it Author

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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon3mth
    Respondeu a Rerian

    the way it started, that i liked

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    The Duke's Youngest Son is a Regressor
    Fantasia · Rerian
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon3mth
    Respondeu a Rerian

    thnx and i'm glad that you got some ideas from the story and ya i'll keep updating.

    The A.I wars
    Fantasia · Captain_doubloon
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon3mth
    Postado

    so here are my thought's the story from the very first chapter makes you curious to read the next chp length is perfect, character design is good.moreover the best thing i can say author says that he never read a webnovel but man your writing is awesome to much of my taste so yeah and i'm waiting for future chps.

    The Duke's Youngest Son is a Regressor
    Fantasia · Rerian
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon3mth
    Comentou

    nice one

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    The Duke's Youngest Son is a Regressor
    Fantasia · Rerian
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon3mth
    Comentou

    nice start, catchy to make readers read next chp

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    The Duke's Youngest Son is a Regressor
    Fantasia · Rerian
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Postado

    so here are my thoughts the writing is good, the pace of the story is slow a bit but still it's interesting and ya it sure needs more chps to develop so i'm waiting for more

    Machinination King in Cultivation World
    Fantasia · ZelretchTheTaoist
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Comentou

    noice gives that black clover and solo-leveling vibe

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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Comentou

    well isn't these revealing the plot too much or is it only me who feel that?

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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Postado

    so i read these book and here are my thoughts: The story depicts a lovable master deciples journey with action, drama, and good character descriptions. I loved the way story was written and can't wait for vol. 2. Moreover, I think these must get contracted, well anyways good luck and keep it up

    My master lived for 100000 years and became unbeatable.
    Fantasia · Imagination_7
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Comentou

    that's what i can say lines to give chills if these were to be said as a dialogue, it would be awesome

    For a moment, I considered his words, weighing the consequences of my decision. But then, with a heavy sigh, I relented, momentarily lifting the pressure of my aura. "Very well," I conceded, my voice tinged with curiosity. "I shall spare your soul. But know this—if you deceive me, the consequences will be dire."
    My master lived for 100000 years and became unbeatable.
    Fantasia · Imagination_7
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Comentou

    How was he even talking then? Well, anyway.

    System,(Level 100000 host).
    My master lived for 100000 years and became unbeatable.
    Fantasia · Imagination_7
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Comentou

    these sure are addictive and make people go deeper.

    The system's response was evasive, hinting at a truth it dared not reveal. "Your power is unlike anything this world has ever seen," it admitted, its tone tinged with a hint of awe. "But to unlock its full potential, you must first reclaim your memories and your strength."
    My master lived for 100000 years and became unbeatable.
    Fantasia · Imagination_7
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Respondeu a Imagination_7

    Thank for your motivation Please keep supporting me in the future

    The A.I wars
    Fantasia · Captain_doubloon
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Respondeu a Bago_Bago_5587

    glad to hear you like the story

    The A.I wars
    Fantasia · Captain_doubloon
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Respondeu a Dreadfull_Dusk

    Thank you, I'm glad you liked the story and I'll keep working on it Please keep supporting like these

    The A.I wars
    Fantasia · Captain_doubloon
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Respondeu a Noidwrite433

    Thank for your motivation and I'll definitely keep working on these Please keep supporting

    The A.I wars
    Fantasia · Captain_doubloon
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Respondeu a IKECARODEV

    glad you liked it

    The A.I wars
    Fantasia · Captain_doubloon
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  • Captain_doubloon
    Captain_doubloon4mth
    Postado

    The story is addictive, and the thing that got my interest was that it gave off a demon slayer vibe and the lovely sibling bond I loved. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Keep it up!

    Rise of the Chaotic Shadow Emperor
    Fantasia · Kofi_
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