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I like this attitude
The boy is very confident, not bad
Fight time!!!
Poor cent, he just wants to eat
Cent is a king with his pride
I can tell it's a beautiful wolf
The boy is experienced
Brutal!!!
Nice job
Let's go
I predict the death of this animal
This technique is cool!
Two alphas
Okay! They are very strong!
I will say my honest opinion. Positive points: The story works well, and the explanation of how the world works is good, and I like how the story revolves around genes. The description is simple, but I can understand it easily. Negative points: The development of the story is bad, the narrative is very long and becomes boring to read. I think reducing the narrative, or describing some scenarios better could work well. I won't say much, since it's at the beginning of the story. I'm not an expert either. I just wanted to convey my sincere point, I hope it doesn't bother you.