he's sort of a winger midfielder hybrid so

don't worry it will all fall in place

dziękuję za Twoją opinię i będę słuchać Twoich sugestii. jeśli chodzi o spotkanie z Iniestą, może się to zdarzyć, jeśli pojadą na przedsezon, jesteś w Japonii, gdzie gra iniesta, więc może to nastąpić w przyszłości

Thanks it was good actuallybut it was only a mock trial so the release is going to be sort of on and off. the Real exam starts in August and ends in late September. but I have breaks in between so I'm going to do my best and release then. Thanks tho

The timeline was inconsistent so I changed everything. I wtopped using the months

I removed the months

what is the name of the original novel

in short,how well and how fast you move infront of obstacles

Well speed is just your speed and agility is how well you are able to manuever your way through obstacles with ease. like dodging and stuffs like that

wait how old is Sara again

Its the position he plays in football at the moment

Dziękuję

you said he had never been injured before but he was injured when he was 9 yrs old.

Nice story Joel but you have to make it a bit realistic. like This chapter per say. most fans would clap for young talents making their debuts not cheer and go nuts

Time skip is near.

Thanks for the feedback. Since his pace and spatial awareness are his biggest stats. I'm gonna make them his priority for Now.

Thank you for that. I will strive to make it better and I will go premium after a few chs

there will be a timeskip in the upcoming chapters. I want to improve my writing quality and also study the story line and characters so I can avoid the inconsistencies and improve the novel

I think its because I haven't gone premium yet. They sent me the contract but haven't signed it yet because I want to reach at least ch 40 before I sign it so you can enjoy it for free for a bit

Because of a timeline problem I changed it. sorry for the inconsistencies