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  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6e4 days ago
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    Love it. One of the best stories not only on webnovel but from other sources. The character development, the plot itself, straight up everything is good. Hope the author keeps the update stable.

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6ea month ago
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    This is simply the author's worst work. I don't know what he was thinking. I read the original, which has almost 1200 chapters and it's still going on. The drama has just gone into space. Whereas it was tolerable before, now it's like it came out of nowhere, and okay it would last 3-5 chapters, but the author stretches it out to 20-50. There should be a logical cycle in stories and the author just gives you drama for a large number of chapters and you read them, you have no catharsis, you get really pissed off from reading. On mc everyone throws shit at him and he just acts arrogant without reacting in any way. Why? He has all the resources to do that and some unknown actors are baiting him. I'm sure the author is doing this on purpose to attract readers and activity in the comments. And the author started stretching some moments even more, which was not the case in previous works. The previous works are much better. My favourite mc is Evan Bell. Not only is he the smartest, taking full advantage of being a time traveller, but he's also vindictive. I usually give a 5 for translation, but here it doesn't even say it's not your work and asks for more support for the paid one.

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6ea month ago
    Respondeu a Daoisto2FJhk

    满级传球,请叫我三狮军团话事人

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6ea month ago
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    Finally, someone has taken on the task of adapting a wonderful novella. And I can definitely say that you've done better than the original, it's obvious that you've tried your best. Since you asked for advice, I can only tell you to concentrate on football and family. In the original, it was annoying that the MC was wasting his time on unnecessary activities like fashion shows and so on. It's like winning the lottery a golden ticket. I can understand it if he's already 30 years old, but to do it at the beginning? That's bullshit.

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6ea month ago
    Respondeu a Sebolatan_Emmanuel

    全能中锋

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6e2 months ago
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    Dude, you're doing a great job. You're not lazy, you translate everything correctly. Finally someone is sharing those masterpieces of Korean stories.

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6e2 months ago
    Respondeu a Sebolatan_Emmanuel

    好莱坞的香瓜人

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6e2 months ago
    Respondeu a HaremHater

    The author's previous novella looks better. And here he ended very abruptly, admitting that he had lost the desire to write. I hope he'll come back in time.

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6e2 months ago
    Respondeu a texih83842

    我不只是神豪

  • Daoisteklg6e
    Daoisteklg6e2 months ago
    Respondeu a RealBanana19

    It's always funny to me when Tom Cruise is compared to these actors, with all due respect, Tom has been in the business for so many years that most of them weren't even in the plans and he was already making huge box office. And it wasn't the Marvel and DC franchises that created artificial superstars, it was individual hits. Who's going to make a pool(billiard) movie today? NO ONE! So for me, Cruise is in a category of his own that Brad Pitt could have approached in the 90s, but greed got the better of him and he chose several unsuccessful projects in a row.