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Option 1 was clearly better.

There's a small error in the story. I think it went unnoticed. How is he 6 years old, if the First Great Ninja War, where his parents died, ended more than 10 years ago? The math doesn't add up. It's impossible.

The story seems interesting so far. My only complaint is that it keeps switching from the character's point of view to a third person. It gets weird and confusing to read.

Great first chapter

I honestly haven't watched much of the series. A few episodes here, a few there, but enough to understand that this story is great. It delivers everything it has to deliver and more. The medical terms, I don't know if they are correct or if they were just added to continue the story, but if they are correct, then congratulations to the writer.

Or the black version of the in-game costume:

Has the Superior Spider-Man costume:

The better question is: Who cares? This is a Fanfic! If the author wants Naruto or any other character, especially his, to do something that is not in line with Canon, he does it. This is not reality. Okay, even the strongest character can die with a kunai. So what? It was done on purpose. It was a way of showing that even something simple can kill the strongest of Shinobi. Kakashi says something similar to Naruto when Haku "kills" Zabuza in his first appearance. But, that's what healing jutsu and other techniques are for. Ah! And about a trained civilian being as strong as a ninja, that's a pretty pointless discussion. Why the hell isn't that person a Shinobi? It can't be because of his lack of opportunity. He might not want to be a Shinobi? Yes. But he has no experience fighting people whose way of fighting is deception. And there are people who have different bodies in this universe. The Third Raikage, He had a body so resistant that he could only be hurt by himself with a jutsu that is 100x sharper than a kunai. Killer Bee took a kick from Sasuke and didn't even move. Suigetsu has a body of WATER! Juugo is also kind of different. The Shinobi's body is, yes, different from that of a civilian. Their bodies are strengthened by Chakra, but this is permanent. It's like a muscle stimulant. Training and Chakra helps to strengthen the body. If a civilian, who can't make his Chakra circulate and won't do anything with a punch, hits a ninja. Of course, unless he trains like Lee and Guy. What I mean is: there's no point in questioning things that are fiction. Because it's FICTION! Sometimes it doesn't make sense. Get over it! PS: No need to reply or anything. Oh, and use paragraphs. It's much easier to read.

A great story. There are few Haikyuu stories and this is definitely one of the best. I hope it continues. I also like the way the romantic development. Not so focused on it, but not leaving it aside either. Natural. The way he interacts with the characters is also cool. He could be a little more relaxed, though. Well, that's it. 5 STARS.

I hope the main costume is red and black. Nothing against red and blue, classic, by the way, but red and black is different.