PolarBerry

I swear , wasn’t a big thing about saiyans is that they were rather emotionally ignorant. Like they grew up in a rigid and unfeeling manner and Bardock and Gine were considered weird. It’s also why Gohan and Goten, or pretty much all the half saiyans were able to achieve super saiyan so easily because strong emotions which facilitate the transformation. Same thing with Cabba and Caulifla

This is what I mean, the grammar has been distorted out of No where

Your grace is reserved for the king and queen. It should be my prince or prince baelon. Also,what the heck is with the grammar, it starts off fine but then it slowly devolves. Like literally, the last chapter was nigh unreadable

This is solid but there are two major glaring problems. One is the odd time jumps, I understand why it’s there but I don’t think it should be as big as it is. And next is the biggest problem holding this back, updates. One chapter a week is awful. It helps that the chapters are so long but at least 2 or 3 chapters a week is would seriously improve the story

No she’s not, The Cannibal was in Westeros before Aegon even came, he was born there, he’s bigger than Vhagar as well.

That’s just assumption? Also it doesn’t matter if he can handle the heat, he’ll still be suffocated or maybe the lava got through his mouth and burned him from the inside, no matter what he died. Maybe soda will bring him back, but currently, he is dead as a door nail

+1

Well this is honestly not surpising, Drogon, at age 3, dwarfed Arrax who was like 14 by the time he died

Kaido still died when he could’ve escaped but he was weakened immensely, I’d say that counts as killing him, he fell into lava💀

Bro looks high