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Bananas on Pancakes - MASJ: https://open.spotify.com/playlist/1jIhW3uEtedo7vX4Rk0myn?si=cf79ae88b57e43ef
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I believe so, or at least something along those lines. It definitely sounds like something he would say 😂
That's a good point, actually. I would like to say that the pass has a chip in it that requires scanning, but I later explain that El inherited Carnage's technopathy, so that's also out the window. For now, assume that Mara forgot about Carnage's technopathy, when she was planning her entrance, until she was later reminded about it by El. I'll add this to the list of things I need to correct when I re-write the first 10 or so chapters once I've improved a little more. Thank you for pointing this out, I appreciate it ❤️
Appreciate the feedback, I'll try to keep it in mind going forward ❤️
She was transmigrated from her Earth in 2022, so would be around Multiverse of Madness. I know Loki came out in 2021, but with how messed up it makes the movies prior to it, with all the timeline plotholes, I've decided to take the route of ignoring it. Endgame is another can of worms that I don't even want to try logically explain because it's such a mess. But basically, I don't plan to do the time travel stuff in Endgame 'cause of how nonsensical it is, so that means the Loki show wouldn't happen due to him not getting the Tesseract since the Avengers never went back in time to fumble it.
I've already got a nickname, which will be mentioned in the next chapter, but I plan to throw in a reference to this at some point. It's too funny not to.
I dunno if I'll do a full chapter, but maybe half of one would be pretty fun to write about. I'll keep a record of every new flavour I introduce, and when I've done enough of them, I'll dedicate half a chapter where Mara talks with the chefs behind the snacks. Maybe like 10 or so flavours and their rankings ❤️
Thanks for the feedback. I want to say that I have no plans of dropping it anytime soon, but 90% of the authors probably think that before they drop a novel, so it's not exactly reassuring. I'll just say that I also hate it when a good novel gets dropped, so provided nothing major happens in my life, I won't drop it, or I will at least communicate how long a potential hiatus will be. Do you mind commenting on the weird parts in the chapters? I don't mean to call you out or anything, it's just chances are if you've found something weird; others have also found it weird but have just stopped reading rather than let me know what they didn't like in it. Thanks for the review, and I hope you enjoy what there is of the story so far ❤️
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It's a saying to mean that no decision has been made on the subject. Basically saying that there's no proof Thor is a God and not just an alien that humans thought was a God
I don't believe so. In the comics, the first time Thor heard of one was when Venom took over his body. And in the MCU, a Klyntar hasn't been officially introduced yet so there hasn't been any mention of him knowing about them. I still need to research a little to see if Odin or Heimdall are aware of them, but if I can't find a definitive answer, I'll assume no one is aware of them
Thor movie currently. Some Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. stuff will be sprinkled in, but a lot of that happened after the Avengers - with the exception of a few flashbacks
Yeah, I didn't want to use it if I had an alternate, but it was the cleanest excuse I could think of. By cleanest, I mean the one with the least amount of possible plot holes. Say, for example, Mara did say that the memories of getting her power were blurry, that wouldn't explain why there's no record of her in any database or the fact that some of her knowledge might not line-up with the MCU. An argument could be made by S.H.I.E.L.D. that someone wiped her records around the time she got her powers, but that pretty much locks in the suspicion that she's from another organisation rather than leave it open and make her seem less suspicious - considering Fury's knowledge of aliens due to the whole Captain Marvel stuff and Thor's appearance in a few weeks time. I also flirted with the idea of having her appear at various events, help out, and then leave without saying anything so that she builds up a reputation for helping S.H.I.E.L.D. so when she does finally speak to them, they're more accepting of her and don't ask as many questions. But I felt like that would cut into things too far, and I'd have to do introductions during story beats rather than before the action, if that makes sense. Hope that explains a bit of what I was thinking about when I resorted to fake memory loss. At the time, if I could have thought up an alternate, I would have gone with the other option, but fake memory loss was the best fit. ❤️
Thank you ❤️ I was meant to put a comment stating what it meant, but I got distracted gaming
Yeah, it is. But even without the Hydra agents, the actual S.H.I.E.L.D. higher-ups have done various questionable deeds, which is why Mara doesn't just blame the Hydra infiltrators for them