Leon_Alquino

Look ... Taking a LITTLE inspiration from AlienWarlord's I'm Spider-Man (MCU) is acceptable , BUT, this is almost direct plagiarism ! Not only the story but also the pace, personality , lines and decisions of the MC are clearly being copied from that story !

What exactly is the value of Units/Credits in the Marvel universe was never really explained but rather left to the imagination of the Reader/Viewer based on the reaction of all the characters to the mentioned amount . Shouldn't the Collector have much more than what was shown ? Sometimes even intergalactic empires act as if a few million units are all they have! Will this be addressed in the future ?

AT LAST! I miss this story so much ! I don't know if it was a pseudopremonition or a coincidence ( probably a coincidence , sometimes I kept remembering this story ) but today . kept thinking about it shortly after waking up . Author , a few years ago you said you were going to come back and when you didn't , I was upset , as were many others , but I'm glad you're back ! Question : Did you just come back to finish the story or are you going to continue with it for a while longer? And will you also update/continue your other stories ?

I really liked the rhythm, the powers, the MC's personality, the canonical characters' personalities, everything . But what I really loved was the way the main character reacts to the canonical characters! In almost all the fanfics I've read about DC ( And Marvel ) , the characters are shown abusing the protagonist and he, just because he followed their stories, ACCEPT this abuse with immense happiness ! ????? Ridiculous ! Even worse : When they DON'T take this abuse, they are instantly labeled as a potential supervillain and are imprisoned 'indefinitely' until they prove that the Justice League can trust them . I don't know what's worse : this happening in fanfictions , which claim to want to show a certain "realism" in these stories or the fact that these things are actually canonical in comics , cartoons , TV series and films .

There are a few ways : 1 - Get Plot Armor . 2 - Hit the Genetic Lottery . 3 - Become an Isekai Cheater Protagonist . 4 - Born with a ridiculously exaggerated amount of "Natural Talent" . Unfortunately it seems that all of these seem to depend entirely on chance ! 5 - You can try to convince the Author to make you strong and skilled without any justification because... Let's be honest... That's all you need to be powerful in fiction !

Are you kidding ? It looks great ! Mainly from the older PJ . You just need to give House more prominence . Despite being simple , it is better than many popular fanfics , as it shows the spirit of your story ! Just a suggestion : Change the image of the Older PJ to the Younger PJ and , as the story continues , make him age on the cover , along with everyone behind him .

Klaus "found peace" ( as with almost all the other Villain Protagonists ) , Rebekah formed a family with Marcel , Alaric faced no repercussions and built a school of supernatural beings and everyone else who survived until the end of the series continued living their lives quietly . And these were just the ones I had the patience to follow . There were many others !

This paragraph summarized the entire Naruto World !

That's why I say she deserved it! What bothers me about these shows is that people much more horrible than her ( that is , ALL the main characters ) got happy endings simply because they were the protagonists or because the protagonists liked them .

This ridiculous inconsistency also made me hate DC and Marvel comics ! Now I just watch movies and read fanfictions .