Lemao_Enamsembilan

warring state = sengoku. It is mistranslate i know.

I just want to tell you man. I really like this fanfiction. But the Orochimaru's invasion arc is too long. That is just my opinion. Other than that is ok. thank you.

You go as Hokage, idiot. It will be showing respect for Hanzo, if the Hokage show himself.

it is just Chinese fanfic being dramatic.

You should change your cover man.

what a dumb MC. why is he still hanging out with her? If he believes her mother cheated him about his creation patent result.

Chinese novel always love the MC talk to himself.

I can give this story 4* for how unique and fresh it is. But story is only one perspective. Like beside kidnapped Naruto the MC killed the genin of team 8, which is the heir of their respective clans but there is no reaction of them in this story. Surely, Konoha in turmoil after that. Oh well, it is just my opinion. it would be good fanfiction if the author show general perspective. If continue like this, just edit the summary with self insert MC. It was interesting at first but I won't continue to read this. Thank you for the translation.

it is just typical a translator who used Google translate. Nyadao is one of them. Sometimes one chapter is fine to read and next become ugly and a mess. The only story on Nyadao account is alright to read is just the Naruto/OnePiece fic with Kizaru is the MC. The other is just like this story.