Mael_

I took a while to understand this

Author here. This is my first novel, but I hope it can entertain you a bit in your free time. Any and all constructive criticism is greatly welcomed. Thank you in advance for all the support.

The chapters will be shorter until the 9th chapter (due to my regular job), but starting from the tenth chapter, I'll try to make them much longer. Thank you very much for the kind words, and I hope the upcoming chapters continue to entertain you.

I was somewhat insecure that people would find this system very confusing.

I don't remember if I mentioned it in the story at any point, but this type of magic is very rare in this universe and is typically passed down to people of the same lineage. Because it's so rare and unique, channelers choose not to teach these skills to outsiders from their village or family. But that was something Garrick didn't know.

With captivating writing and a plot that draws you in from the very first chapter, this story has everything it takes to become your new favorite. I hope that as the chapters progress, the novel and its mysteries will be explored even further.

Thank you very much for the beautiful words. I hope the next chapters continue to please you.

Thank you very much for the beautiful words and support. I will read your story for sure

I liked the beginning of the story, I hope you continue with this great work.

I hope you continue to find this as the story progresses