undercover_kat

this chapter feels off, like no one was able to give her any information for 2 years? or decided to just let her suffer thinking rosalie didn't want her, not even a simple "come home, it's important"? I get that she moves a lot and send them letters, but to not be able to get any information for 2 years and be OK with it? someone could die and she wouldn't know, like one of the cousins or someone she wouldn't feel, idk just felt uncharacteristic of her, like drama for drama's sake

🚩🚩🚩 never trust when people rush you like that without letting you think, he's literally the one who killed you first and if he saw you and Phillip he also saw his obsession, the one strong enough to kill you too and he didn't even addressed it, he invited you to the banquet, what's to say his motives are different now? why does she have to be so dumb, like, your life is on the line, it's ok to have at least a drop of paranoia towards all involved, that includes him who killed you first

her lack of braincells is frustrating. Is she really only going to focus on a single part? Not where she was, who she was with, what she did, which could literally be what she's doing right now 🤦🏻‍♀️

a good friend would warn you of actual danger. This feels more like manipulation, like she didn't forgave him, so he gave her vague little teaser warnings and told her to come to him if she wanted to know more, if it end up being something real, serious and that she really needs to know, he's the guy that rather she goes chasing after him than worries for her actual safety 🤨🤔

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which I did. Did you catch it?

trust, totally not a lie or anything 👀

Seriously, are you paying attention?

🤔🤔🤔 yes, I'm rereading and commenting. That's because it's been a while, and I don't want to accidentally forget something or think I wrote something I only thought of and never actually did write down, so you get clues with the notes, are you paying attention? 😏🧐🤔😏

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