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Okay , i dont know why the relise is too slow author you have to give us more chapters its one of the highest novels potential ever in this website never read this style before

I liked your description of the characters and the scenery which makes the story more enjoyable. Good job. I liked your description of the characters and the scenery which makes the story more enjoyable. Good job.

We're almost at 50 ch so I wanted to post a review so I can respond to any questions people have. We're almost at 50 ch so I wanted to post a review so I can respond to any questions people have.

This story was written well. Although, there were a few instances where commas were used too much in just 1 sentence. I suggest using either an em dash (—) or parentheses when there's an added thought or phrase to a complete sentence. Nonetheless, storytelling is clear and engrossing. I especially like how the author describes a character's physical features, an object's characteristics, and the worldbuilding.

Thank you for your MAD SUPPORT

I will add Chapter X SOON

thanks

We're almost at 50 ch so I wanted to post a review so I can respond to any questions people have. We're almost at 50 ch so I wanted to post a review so I can respond to any questions people have.