Scheletro_Fumante
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Scheletro_Fumante6 days agoComentoudamn story going in good direction so far , here a stone for you sir
- Scheletro_Fumantea month agoComentou
totally valid
- Scheletro_Fumantea month agoComentou
- Scheletro_Fumantea month agoPostado
everthings good and dandy except starting story development and world background cause nothing makes logical sense right now ps { only twelve chapter right now so there may be improvement or degradation of story who knows }
- Scheletro_Fumante2 months agoComentou
np
- Scheletro_Fumante2 months agoRespondeu a BaDwY_GaMeR
my advice is that you need a proof reader that can correct mistakes and an editor who can make the story flow better PS i see great potential in it so keep it up
- Scheletro_Fumante2 months agoPostado
Great story and good character personality creation for deku and others but damn the updates are slower then a snail <<would love to binge read but it ended at ch 34 MORE UPDATES PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS >>
- Scheletro_Fumante2 months agoComentou
yup
- Scheletro_Fumante2 months agoPostado
its a mlbb fancfic what more to say PS. {im an argus main} ... ..... .............................. ......................................... .........