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decadence_13 months ago
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I admit, this is a good concept. The translation is clean, a rare occurence. But one thing that i find very distasteful is the logic. Idk man, it's just too forced. Like there are many instances where i question the flow of logic from THE police officer. A job which requires sound logic in the first place. Like, the thought process which led them to that conclusion is too abrupt. As their thought only flow in linear way, without considering any other possibility. False charging someone twice and what? No consequence at all? Attorney general? Journalist? And what is this paraphrasing to Martial World and other similar toned wording? Talking about cheating in gambling game as if it's a grand concept. The exaggeration is too much. It's even a little bit confusing at first, like i'm really questioning if the world is truly modern world or wuxia/xianxia mixed with modern world.