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Approve.The first chapter is extra exciting and intriguing, followed by the awakening of the Mc and his unique skills. So far I didn't find problems in writing quality. That is all! Please upload more chapters 🙏.
Story- Good Power system- good Story potential- exceptional Character development- Above average Emotional prospective- Need little improvement System Designing- Exceptional Keep up good work
sorry, for not giving chapters for such a long time, but be happy guys, because now I am back with a lot of chapters which are even better than previous ones. hold your hearts.
More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter!
You better write more chapter. Because I am waiting here for them
Done solving problem.
But if you message it mean you kind of liked story right. Thank you message. I will correct it.
thank your for review, and enjoy the story.
Thank you.
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