Harley_DB

Please fix the chapter Author

Great novel so far 👍 I really liking the characters and the world building.

Make it like at first when he could just got pure nen from corpses to increase his overall nen pool, why make it like this now? Your just trying to find ways to give him a gamer system without outright giving him one. His nen ability already lets him get power and items from corpses so why the redundancy?

If it’s physical strength why not just say that? Why make up Dao power? It’s confusing for no reason🤦‍♂️

What happened to him being outside anakins room end of last chapter?

We get it, your obsessed with little girls, please stop mentioning it, it’s getting weird now

Really good story so far, please keep writing author [img=update][img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapters

Good story and I like the main character [img=recommend]