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The book has potential to provide an expanding story. It has a classic concept of online games story but it's approach with the concept introduce in the prologue. Can't wait to see how this story would go.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Your writing improve quite a bit so as the follow of the story. Keep it up.

Not much fan of scary stories but your story got me really intrigued. Keep uploading more chapter to attract other readers. Your book really has so much potential shown in the first 3 chapter.

Keep up the good work and upload more chapter.

You can try to limit your word count per chapter at 1500. That will help you have more chapter to upload

The story is interesting and intriguing but it needs a more attractive start that will hook the readers to the story.... The writing quality is so far great... The story development along with main character development is a bit in the slow side but it's not a bad thing. Rather it will probably gives more depth to the story and character... Overall, this book has so much potential.

The writing quality is a bit lacking... What I mean is interms of how the paragraphs are arrange which is kinda different from usual... However, how the story was written is easy to follow and understand... The story development show so much potential and the characters have intriguing personality that catches my interest... I hope this book will find more readers.

So far, the story really catch my interest... Keep up the good work.