Jellyfish_Rogers
My subjects and I love to consume all sorts of media:from comics, mangas and television shows to movies, novels and plays. Hope I bring forth 🔥 fanfiction stories that satiate your desires and hunger
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Our protagonist did not have a training arc, or a training process because he's an unnaturally talented being, with extra powers like [Adaptive Development] and [Power System] to boot. He never had to struggle to learn anything; instinctively knowing how to do something, just by watching it being done. Zerun is bratty, arrogant and outspoken, that is who he is. He will learn to be more compassionate, considerate, and fun. Though your suggestion to show a training arc will be used during a particular story arc; one where he creates his own sub-bending. Moving forward, your suggestion to have more of Zerun's POV is something that'll definitely happen. Thank you for your constructive criticism, and thank you for reading my novel. Hopefully, it'll be one you enjoy.
Our protagonist did not have a training arc, or a training process because he's an unnaturally talented being, with extra powers like [Adaptive Development] and [Power System] to boot. He never had to struggle to learn anything; instinctively knowing how to do something, just by watching it being done. Zerun is bratty, arrogant and outspoken, that is who he is. He will learn to be more compassionate, considerate, and fun. Though your suggestion to show a training arc will be used during a particular story arc; one where he creates his own sub-bending. Moving forward, your suggestion to have more of Zerun's POV is something that'll definitely happen. Thank you for your constructive criticism, and thank you for reading my novel. Hopefully, it'll be one you enjoy.
Energy bending to take away his waterbending will not work. Chi-blocking is something he'll instantly adapt to
Go Read: Avatar the Last Airbender: Deep Waters (SI) (Reincarnation)
Lao Ge, also known as Tieguai the Immortal, claimed to have unlocked the secret of immortality at some point; it was rumored that he was more than two hundred years old. He even hinted at being more than four thousand years old by the 3rd century BG. He had numerous disciples, most of whom hoped to become immortal themselves. One of his disciples was Avatar Kyoshi, who learned his methods and went on to live for 230 years. --- Explored in Kyoshi Novels
I hope you find my fanfiction, an enjoyable read. I loved Power Rangers as a kid. Now, that's an idea. 🔥
Yes, he will. It'll be further explored in upcoming chapters. Our MC will develop a freeform style of bending, that's a mash-up of many different ones
Thank you! Zerun will have many interactions with Team Avatar, and will participate in important canon plotlines. Yet I wish to send my MC on his own separate journey, exploring the fun, grand world of 'Avatar'