nice one

Thank you very much for the review. I understand and agree with your opinion of the childish character of the MC, but that is exactly how I want to portray him in The Beginning Arc. A lonely and problematic orphan from Earth, who gets reborn and acts out of his character under the rushing events of an unfamiliar isekai world. Don't worry, the next arc Guild Wars, will entirely develop his personality and mind, tho that sounds like a spoiler.....

thank you 😊

how would a normal person feel when they suddenly start magically manipulating the earth

umm Felix has experience in fights from earth

i really like your ideas about these skills, there's a channel in my discord server created for mentioning and discussing about skills. would be great if you joined

cost of every skill depends on the change that it may bring into reality. like a fireball skill would cost around 160 skill points because all it does is create elemental balls of fire in the air. but for a skill to manipulate the time of the entire world or universe, which is too large compared to orbs of fire appearing in his hands, even for around 20 seconds, it would cost millions of skill points. but instead of a time reversal skill tho, it would be better to create a skill that can reverse only the actions of a single person.

battle skills cost more than auxiliary skills

he knows such a skill will cost a lot. thats why he isn't trying to create one yet

Can you please elaborate? 🫠

it will cost too much sp to manipulate the earth

Thank you for your review. Your words are absolutely true, I've made some amateurish mistakes (cuz I am amateur) from the beginning of the novel, and the plot holes like power levels are going to be a bit difficult to correct now. But let me inform you this: In this novel's world, a being's power doesn't entirely depend on its Rank. It depends on mamy things like race, skills, experience and at last their rank. So basically, a Rank 1 human could easily kill 10 Rank 1 goblins, but it cannot defeat a Rank 2 goblin. If you have any more questions, please ask me again.

That won't do. There's a reason the system wants Felix to kill higher-ranking beings. Btw thanks for your opinion.

Felix:

sorry for the late reply. Felix is 14 while Steve and his friends are 18

sudden plot and lack of sp

Thank you for your review! This is my first novel, so I'm still learning things. But I'll be sure to take the reader's opinions and improve myself. If you find any problems in the story, then please let me know. Happy Reading!

it takes a toll on his mental power and stamina.