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Another missed opportunity, 120 chapters and the only thing different from the anime and dialogue and some naruto techniques, it had potential but the author can't move far from the canon.
Bro.. what is the man's crime for you to show him hell?
This new cover is better than the others
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In my opinion, you shouldn't give the mc the unlimited, since whoever has the six eyes can use it, and as the six eyes are not a technique, the mc shouldn't be able to use the unlimited (using naruto logic, the techniques are like the releases of lava, storm, steam... the six eyes would be like biakugan and sharingan). Correct me if I'm wrong but MC only has the techniques, right?
Remember the Flash, when he takes several books at super speed, he "gets" the knowledge, but only until he gets out of the super speed. It makes sense for you to put this "nerf" on him because what would prevent him from discovering all the magic of Hogwarts in less than a year.
I wrote words through words, but it can't express the feeling I had when reading this chapter, the respect that Naruto has for Danzo is in a way beautiful, he doesn't agree with his actions but understands why he did them. I must say Hyvnn you have the gift of portraying feelings and the motivations that lead characters to feel them. I'm happy to be able to read this work. Thank you for continuing to write despite the difficulties you face with your notes.
On this platform few stories are as good as this one, good writing quality, interesting chapters, and a good world and character development.