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I love the story and its direction. I like how it tackles what happens when Peter stops being Spider-Man and seeing the different reactions of the people around him. The gripe I have though is the incorrect grammar. I recommend using Grammarly to help clean up the text a bit. The text spacing could also be adjusted for readability and there are unnecessary indents. I also hope the different personalities in Peter could be more distinguishable in their words. I feel they all almost sound the same. This could be seen when Goku, and Natsu questioned who were the others who accepted the system. It felt copied pasted dialogue. The fight scenes could be more engaging and detailed instead of summarizing the result in a single paragraph or sentence. I hope to see more of the story and for the author to improve more in his writing.
If you read ch 1 I did mention Hulk was still in the run and it was Captain Marvel who participated in the battle of New York.
Ex-aid is already in my Patreon. as for Wizard, I plan to use him when the MC interacts with the magical side of the world I don't have plans for that yet. For Gaim, maybe sooner or later depends on how I write the scenes and enemies the MC will fight.
Jean is in her twenties and a teacher. Her being part of the harem is pretty low. Depending on how I write future events, there is a chance, but she loves Scott, so I might leave those two as a couple. As for Wanda, I'm not sure yet. I'm still deciding her origins if she is with Magneto her father or the same in the MCU. Will see when I start writing her.
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I will post a pic soon but webnovel is having problems on pc
Some Riders could reach that level in their final forms. Otherwise in their base forms they mostly are street level
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Well, to be fair the MC wasn't going all out. If he used Climax Form they could easily beat Logan but this fight is more of a spar instead of needing to win. I just want the Imagins to fight, especially Momotaros because if I ignore it for too long. The dude would just explode from stress.