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Oh, someone with decent judgment. As an author, let me tell you that you are absolutely right. I don't deny that there are strong and explicit elements . But well that's the kind of novel it is, and that's life; it has a little bit of everything. I like to have objective comments like yours, as they help me grow as a writer, although it is negative I will keep it in mind.Bye-bye(≧∇≦)ﾉ

I think I have fixed what you pointed out, thank you, every day I strive to improve this novel more, as a writer, well, as always I appreciate your comments.(´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)

sorry, I fixed it, thank you very much for pointing it out.(╹ڡ╹ )

He can be whatever he wants to be, and my friend, that also includes this.

I'm sorry English is not my native language and I'm not that good at it, but eventually I will hire an editor to fix it. ╯︿╰

I also considered that possibility, but I wanted a unique and rare name, so I stuck with that one

Yes, regarding that, here is my Facebook to talk on Messenger. https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=61560729814709

Thank you very much for your comment, I'm glad you like my work. As for the participation thing, the truth is that I'm new in the world of writers, and anything you have in mind I would appreciate, since I'm just starting and any impulse is welcome.