Ignox_Xongi

Has huge potential

Tse skhozhe na kanonichnu istoriyu (15 rozdiliv) zmarnovanoho chasu! Avtoru potribno bulo (1-2 rozdilakh) shchob povernuty oryhinalʹnykh spohadiv dlya holovnoho heroya, a potim uzhe prodovzhuvaty pysaty. A tak ya prosto ne bachu sensu tse chytaty!

Marvel's Spider-Man: Across the Universe 漫威蜘蛛侠：纵横宇宙

Marvel's Spider-Man: Across the Universe 漫威蜘蛛侠：纵横宇宙

Add the TAG - HAREM!!!

Harry Potter is our main character, he is like a magic wand for everyone! The story is not interesting, wiping everyone's snot is very annoying. All other secondary characters are cardboard! The main character does not behave like an older person who has survived the WAR and has many losses of people close to him. He is more like a teenager of 15-17 years old without experience of real hard life before the crossing after death! It seems that even if theoretically the original Harry Potter died, and our main character did not arrive, this world will simply be destroyed by Voldemort.