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It's a good story so far, slow-paced. The conversation between the MC and the Alchemy Emperor is entertaining. However, it would be great if you could adjust some extravagant wording as most readers wouldn't be able to understand it without assistance.
"They've just got a good eye" needs to be edited. The "They've" sounds odd in this sentence.
"I know, right!" this one sounds odd.
The Father should be more surprised by adding a question mark along with the punctuation to make it look more energetic.
This dialogue needs improvement.
First and Second dialogue of the Alchemy Emperor after arriving sounds flat.
you can highlight it.
At this point he just looks like a background character.
It does though. Do you not know how a single tsunami can shape an area into an aquatic world waterpark?
Huh? You'll just leave your readers in a state of confusion unable to see the current state of your world after all those chaos.