Onion_lover

Aside from the fact that this reads like a mtl, the mc is a bastard. In chapter 40 his true power was witnessed by a woman that fled from a strong opponent. Her intention at first was to buy time for him to flee, but after she realized it was meaningless she gave up. Later the mc shows how overpowered he is and kills the guy who chased her. Since she has seen some of his true power now, he wants to kill her though. This wouldn’t be a problem in itself, if he didn’t change his mind and felt like it would be a good idea to completely control her mind and then r*pe her. Long story short: Mc is a r*pist, don’t read if you are a decent human being.

First

Couldn’t even get past the first chapter with such an unlikable mc. He talks about how life might be better if society collapsed and everyone lived more primal… „I would be an Apex Predator in such a world.“ So the mc just seems to be a delusional edgelord. Aside from that weird train of thought, he also stalks his ex gf and wants to send death threats to her new boyfriend, which the author somehow tries to display as a good character trait? also his ex reacted so unrealistically, almost like they just had a casual conversation after he stalked her at work and told her he wanted to drink her personal milk. just seems really weird to make your main character such a weirdo and douchebag

I just noticed that this might come over a bit wrong. I would like to apologize for that. I meant it more in a way where everybody needs those skills. Not just Marie because of her gender.

do you mean zephyr?

so, shouldn’t he slowly run out of copy cards? and why is the ice fruit golden when lightning was only purple

thought this was a mistake the first time, but why do you use pele instead of berries/bellies

im very sorry, but I just started med school and i’ve got a lot to do, since I still haven’t found a place to live in the city i study in, which means I have to travel about 3 hours every day. I will move in to my new apartment in november and try to get out a few chapters then

why would it consume chakra per minute? it’s not like the earth would otherwise vanish

Didn’t Rocks say that he wanted to eat the Dark-Dark fruit in the earlier chapters? Why didn’t he just do it back when it hadn’t been stolen by the marines yet