I aim for the stars. Try my best to make my book great. Earn from it, and become the top. I'll not be human if I don't have this little bit of ambition.
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My earlier chapters are filled with too many grammatical errors and unnecessary wordings. The MC's behaviour is not constant and is hard to follow. The narrative is interesting but bugged down by bad expertise in writing. So, I am informing you all that for the next few days I won't be updating anything and would focus on editing and reworking the narrative. Ten days from now, we'll enter WIN-WIN and MGS, but the thing is that if my writing has quantity but no quality, we won't get far. So, for the next nine days, I'll focus on editing all my chapters to bring its quality high, or at least do what I can. Don't worry for I'll mass release nine chapters since I missed nine days. I won't let the readers suffer just because of my reason to bring thr quality of the book higher. To all those who've supported me so far, I sincerely thank you, for you guys are the one who motivated me even when I only had one effective readers. I hope you all won't abandon the book and would keep supporting. You can even try reading it cause I'll update all my edits nine days from now. Once again, I thank you all who've supported me till now and would keep supporting.
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Just Nicole? Alright
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
But I get your point. Dusken shouldn't have revealed such a big secret. So, yeah. What's done is done. However, it won't happen in the future chapters. This, I promise you.
Yh what you said is true. But remember that she's a candidate too right? Dusken had did that to probe her reaction. And since she believed him readily, although he wasn't sure, he still had suspicions that Lillian was a candidate.
I noticed that also. So I'll try and improve on that
Cause she's level one. You know that Dusken only became level one due to him killing that awakened beast with Kyle. So, he believes that she is not a candidate because she's a level one and the other candidates are level zeros.