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Erik_D1dComentouhaha never thought I might find some german when trying to read more English. It sounds slightly wacky because of your sentence structure and you should make it "Eure Hoheit"(in English : your highness) Gut gemacht 👍
"Hoheit, wie war Ihr Schlaf? Ich sehe, dass Ihr Hemd ein bisschen klebrig ist, also muss es ein schlechter Traum gewesen sein?"- Erik_D12dComentou
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Namikaze Mirai leaped from the vantage point, his body arced in mid-air and his blond hair shimmered in the sunlight as he descended gracefully towards the heart of the village. - Erik_D14dComentouCh 39 Chp-38 Declaration of.....
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Zenith – meaning peak or highest point, symbolizing the flagship as the peak of my fleet. - Erik_D20dComentouA short pain and cry later, Narzug looked different than before. He hadn't turned into a bear, and to his great regret, not into a dragon either. Narzug now had a hybrid form between a dragon and an orc. But not an overly strong draconic form, no, the only change he could recognize was that now a scaly armor ran over half of his upper body up to his shoulders and upper arms. If Narzug had to compare it, he would say that he looked a bit like Kaido from One Piece in his hybrid form - minus the dragon tail.
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maybe.............
Author's Thoughts: Another cliff... I hope I can leave the house without being kidnapped... :D - Erik_D20dComentouAuthor's Thoughts: Honestly, he's a character I really like.Poor Filius... should I kill him or not?
- Erik_D20dRespondeu a 1emanresU
what you are doing is destructive criticism and it does not help that you are just telling him it sucks, yes you've made your point with where it is bad. Tell him how he could improve his way of writing or storytelling. If you want to read something more professional, then suggest you either get yourself a real book or one of those apps with real books from long time authors. You should also work on your criticism, so that it may help not destroy it.
- Erik_D21dComentouNow, the sheer cost of recruiting 472,030 naval crewmen is just mind-numbing.
- Erik_D21dComentou"I can't help but wonder, is the person standing in front of me now an Auror or a brutal Death Eater?!"
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I hope he is under the imperius curse, while I don't like him it would be completely dumb of him to help the Man who wants the death of everyone but pure blood mages
Author's Thoughts: I found the identity of the traitor quite obvious. :D - Erik_D21dComentouMissed me? (≧▽≦)
- Erik_D23dComentouHonestly, he couldn't really decide whether it was a blessing or a curse to have learned of these two behemoths fighting in the shadows. On one side, he hated not being aware, and he hated not being in control of things because if he wasn't in control, chaos would ensue; only his hands could possibly keep the world safe.
- Erik_D23dRespondeu a ChaosKamiCh 46 Consideration and another one