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RyukiAkuma

RyukiAkuma

Lv3
2023-06-20 UnidoGlobal
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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a MarquisofHell1

    Yes, only daughter but not in harem...

    Lying on the straw mat, Ye Mingrui's long black locks fanned out around her head like a dark halo. Her slender legs were splayed open, revealing the tender pink flesh between them. She felt a shiver run through her body as she watched Ye Nolisi approach, his cock glistening in the dim light. Slowly, almost teasingly, he pressed himself against her entrance, stretching her slowly until he was fully inside her.
    altalt
    Slice of Life: Ye Nolisi's Life
    Oriental · RyukiAkuma
    detail
  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a shinu316

    Yes... I skipped directly to this.

    Lying on the straw mat, Ye Mingrui's long black locks fanned out around her head like a dark halo. Her slender legs were splayed open, revealing the tender pink flesh between them. She felt a shiver run through her body as she watched Ye Nolisi approach, his cock glistening in the dim light. Slowly, almost teasingly, he pressed himself against her entrance, stretching her slowly until he was fully inside her.
    altalt
    Slice of Life: Ye Nolisi's Life
    Oriental · RyukiAkuma
    detail
  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Alpha_astro

    When his disciple finished the first realm of martial arts.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Malcolm_Massey

    Thank you for noticing and reminding me.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Uphar

    The first 19 chapters are mostly copied from the original novel, after that I began to put my original ideas and writing. So comment after you read those and tell me how you like it.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Netaram_Rajak

    When she refines her Organs Tempering... So that will take 10 more chapters.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Gerald_Ikem

    I check up and correct those things... Thank You...

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a FallenAngeI

    Nope, when he gets a system,, he becomes confident enough to face challenges.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a faeeeee

    It happened, it's just that I didn't write details about that, and mentioned it like this.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Netaram_Rajak

    You're right, if MC were perfect then I wouldn't be able to write a character development.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Zed1_Eren_

    Yes, there is

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Gerald_Ikem

    Of course. I don't have the skill to write a weak MC interesting, so of course he will get stronger.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a SethKang

    Yes, I will explain as the story progresses.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Ahmed_Koroma_1382

    Next chapter is about her, and also give her time to devolpe, She might be mother but her character is not like usual gentle mother.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a AaronchifV2

    You're right about it, and I admit this since I'm quite lazy. Some more chapters are just going to be copy-pasted. But after Bai Nuima's mother's introduction, introducing some more original characters and changing some decisions will give the novel a different route than the novel I'm just making up exercise. My disciple, have you truly mastered them. I enjoy reading, I'm just making up exercise, my disciple, have you truly mastered the novel? but there were some things I didn't like and some things I wanted to add in the novel, but all these changes are after 15 chapters, so before that I just decided to copy paste.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a GoddessAlbedo

    No, if I wanted to keep a secret, I wouldn't have added a system tag. He will receive a system, but the type of system will be revealed later.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Alibi_Lullaby

    Did I?... I discovered a new side of me... Anyways... I do make sure she gets cleaned up.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a bndr

    No Chapters for now, I'm focusing on My other two, which are My Disciple's Hot Mother is After Me and Slice of Life: Ye Nolisi's Life

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Venerable_Read3r

    Actually, she worked in a farm, and did some work, so I wanted to show that, so I showed it by her dirty legs, but yeah, most of the time she maintains basic hygiene.

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  • RyukiAkuma
    RyukiAkuma1mth
    Respondeu a Fallenfaith44

    You can see it when I upload that chapter tomorrow...

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