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The POVs were initially switching between 1st and 3rd POV according to the personas of Dora in control, (it's back to normal after chapter 31 so please bear with it just a little), but I understood it was a bad idea so I am currently in the process of re-editing every chapter until 31
The best decision would have been to follow Thomas' plan, but you've resumed the only problem: this Sin a child in mind and was formatted by the others, so they ended regretting when confronted with the facts. The plan would have worked if they could have been monsters till the end.
answer: yes
I give you a big warning: the following 14 chapters will make your blood boil, but trust me, everything that will happen is the base of a great final arc. I'm here in case you need more information, even spoilers if you can't take it anymore.
The true Dora, you'll understand in future chapters (aka 120-184)
yeah👍
two people told me the mc wasn't op on discord, look the current trending, good books nowadays must have op mc beating everything from the beginning
We never know what was on the plan of the author, I too am a reader so as a writer I know what I want and what I'm tired to see. I know where this story is going and I have no intention to write another cliche here to milk the story over thousand chapters.
If you think it was good you should trust the author in what he's doing.
I see
I understand, I'll change that then, thanks
don't know what is legion but ok
Dora 11 years old
many things happens in the shadow